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okay I have one more song ehm: Jinggle Bells Eggman smells, Sonic saves the day~ Miles flies, Knuckles glides Sonic Heroes all the way~
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Better, but again place the "And" between flies and Knuckles Like this: "Miles flies, and Knuckles glide"
Also, personally recommend you use ";" at the end of Glide like "and Knuckles glides; Sonic Heroes all the way~" then it'd be perfect grammar wise.
Oh, one more thing, "Jingle" is spelled with one "g".
Once you do this, it'll be perfect.
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