Posted 5 Nov 2013 The skunk finds Blur's story boring but is not happy none have crit his story in the same section. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 I read it, And I criticised it, Kinda. But It was in a PM. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 Look, I'm rewriting the last two parts. Happy? And besides, I could just spam you RIGHT NOW! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 I would seriously suggest not doing that, BlueBlur. I prefer this place when people are being FRIENDLY to each other (This goes for both sides) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 Whoops. Not very mature of me. But the skunk still is the tick-offer to me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 Make a good impression. That's my advice in this circumstance Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 You can continue the story. Make it less boring. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 If your talking to me there, I'm not really a story teller which is why I haven't done anything there. Please don't trust me with carrying it on Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 I won't. I was speaking indirectly. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 Blurry, there is a think I also learned that work in all circumstance : Never try to push people to do something. It never do any good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 5 Nov 2013 Blur your story is based around the penders characters being fired. Geoffrey is a penders so no matter how hard you try i will never like that story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 I see well if I am in a good mood one day I will give it a read but I can't make any promises and nice new members title. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 That's ... surprisingly patient of You Goeffrey . It's a good thing . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 Wait…I didn't even add that title. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 Nope that title was a gift from me Blur. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 This skunk is once again a being of many secrets, acting from the shadows... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 http://sonicfoamyfan9805.deviantart.com/art/dad-s-comment-on-the-archie-situation-326491202 Dinkleberg! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 I thought Geoffrey only changed member titles if they sing for him Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 Well , you changed it on your own. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 That's because advanced members can change their own Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted 7 Nov 2013 Did you also had to do a cute avatar ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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